I really like how your stories are all interconnected. It allows you to tell a story without going over six words. That's something that not everybody did, I'm positive. Especially now that you're writing about a pretty deep thing here.
My favorite "story" was the last one because it gives off such a strong feeling and has different possible meanings depending on the person. The stories was nicely written and gives off a strong emotion to the readers.
I really like how your stories are all interconnected. It allows you to tell a story without going over six words. That's something that not everybody did, I'm positive. Especially now that you're writing about a pretty deep thing here.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite "story" was the last one because it gives off such a strong feeling and has different possible meanings depending on the person. The stories was nicely written and gives off a strong emotion to the readers.
ReplyDeleteGreat sentences, although they were only six words you did a great job of giving them meaning, especially the last one.
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